It seems to me that this page is two different topics (possibly more) lumped together into one article. The sections "The hag" and "Tiffany and the Chalk" don't really seem to relate to subject of Edge Witchcraft. However, I'm also not sure edge witchcraft is explained very well either, which might be why. TC01 19:02, 20 April 2010 (UTC)
- Yep, pretty rambling. Needs splitting up and organising. --Old Dickens 19:06, 20 April 2010 (UTC)
Well, I know what I mean, but you can't win them all. Go on then, have a go at explaining edge witchcraft better. Organise as you see fit. --Emen 21:37, 20 April 2010 (UTC)
- Well, it's easy for the writer to know what he means but harder for the reader to know what the writer means.
- I have edited the article. I also removed a lot of text. I tried to keep what seemed relevant in there, but I'm not perfect. It's all available in the page history if people want to go through it. I was basically attempting to organize based on the content already in the article, so I removed stuff about having a strong connection with the land. The information provided seemed to say only Tiffany has a strong connection with the land, not edge witches in general- therefore, not relevant. TC01 00:38, 21 April 2010 (UTC)
Thank you, I am sure that is clearer. I fear you may have burned midnight oil to do it so quickly. --Emen 07:24, 21 April 2010 (UTC)